A #smallwriting exercise

- I set up at the old card table
To write such lines as I am able.
2. Across the yard on sunny morn
The wattle-scented breeze is borne.
3. Grevillea in gold and green
Against blue sky is gladly seen.
4. Herb or hemlock here is grown
And which it be is not yet known.
5. A pigeon preens and puffs its chest
To show of them which is the best.
6. A clover daisy shows its head
To signal now that Winter’s dead.


7. A choir of voices here is heard
Each clear note sounds from a bird.
8. A breeze stirs softly through the trees
The honey scent that calls the bees.
9. Brighter and lively of the two
Weeds now thrive where grass once grew.
Craft Notes & Stories
My #smallwriting exercise this morning was to write a set of couplets. The purpose was not to produce great poetry – as you may no doubt observe- but to connect eye-mind-hand.
I set myself a time limit of 25 minutes to see what I could produce. It was a lot of fun! And I even have an idea or two for a story later on. That fourth couplet holds some promise:
Herb or hemlock here is grown
And which it be is not yet known.
And there’s something about couplet #9 – with those weeds thriving beautifully outside the pot that offers me some hope!
That old card table – I remember when my parents purchased it. We never played cards on it but it’s travelled with me for about 60 years. I’ve done my homework on it, written university assignments on it, and painted roadways, rivers, and model soldiers on it. It’s pretty battered. I like that it’s still with us and might find new purpose. That offers me some hope too!

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